Score: 7

"nice trees"

submission: Bonzaii Bunny IV

date: August 2, 2004

nice graphics... some of those woodland creatures remind me of the rat creatures in the Bone series... Ever heard of it?
...oh and I don't know what that guy was talking about... this is a hundred times better than any stick figure movie... in fact I kinda feel that those things should just be banned...

Score: 9

"great job"

submission: Elwood: The Fly

date: August 1, 2004

its nice to see a funny cartoon where little animals don't get blown up...

very funny and well done.
good audio

Score: 8

"interesting"

submission: Drawing Tutorials

date: July 29, 2004

although there are other ways to draw faces in flash.. your way seems to work pretty well... and if I had seen this a couple months ago I could have saved a lot of time figuring out how to stream the sound...
great job
(I like tutorials!)

Score: 7

"I liked the cartoons"

submission: Tomato's Sombrero

date: July 29, 2004

that was good for your first animation - you seem to be pretty natural at drawing in flash... my only suggestion would be to work on the plot/joke... it didn't really make a lot of sense...
...and personally I'm not a fan of the computer generated voices (but then again a lot of people are so whatever)
...good job though - I liked it!

Score: 7

"simple and sweet"

submission: Storytime: Church Flowers

date: July 28, 2004

good job it was nice and simple... the punchline was definitely corny... what I thought was funnier though was the previous reviewer's confusion...

Score: 9

"great job"

submission: Pizza Guys

date: July 28, 2004

man that was great! - it reminded me A LOT of College University... with style of humor... the style of animation and the transformer...
-some nice quick-paced humor.
oh and I think the eyes would be better if they weren't big black circles - (maybe add a shade of gray or something) - either way it is a great cartoon - do more please!

Score: 9

"Funny Stuff"

submission: Bean TV

date: July 26, 2004

man that was funny - especially with the laughing idiot and the emo tv... good job - it would be a lot better though if you thought of a plot...

Score: 7

"GREAT MUSIC"

submission: Broken Home

date: July 26, 2004

ExCepTioNaL choice in mucic - it really fit the mood and it doesn't get much better than Pink Floyd and RadioHead - Awesome!
... you mentioned that you didn't draw the car...
... so I assume that you didn't draw the house either... ???

Score: 5

"because you asked for criticism:"

submission: "Dream"

date: July 25, 2004

Good job - I thought the first scene wiht the clouds and the buildings was real nice... and the different angle shots add a lot....
here are some things you might do to improve it:
- use something besides such a thin black line (especially on the face)
- make her eyes smaller (they're too close together)
- when she is running, in the shot from behind, she runs bow-legged... make her feet only move up and down

Score: 3

"potentially good cartoon"

submission: Dinky and pet rock Ep. 1

date: July 24, 2004

this cartoon has an abstract, light humor that is enjoyable to watch, but it clearly needs a lot of work... I would reccomend:
- a LOT of works on the graphics...
- synchronizing the mouth movement to the talking (although it takes a lot of time)
- and funnier voices (which is hard for people lacking a funny voice - inclucing myself)
...hope to see some more (and better) stuff in the future!