nice graphics... some of those woodland creatures remind me of the rat creatures in the Bone series... Ever heard of it?
...oh and I don't know what that guy was talking about... this is a hundred times better than any stick figure movie... in fact I kinda feel that those things should just be banned...
its nice to see a funny cartoon where little animals don't get blown up...
very funny and well done.
although there are other ways to draw faces in flash.. your way seems to work pretty well... and if I had seen this a couple months ago I could have saved a lot of time figuring out how to stream the sound...
(I like tutorials!)
I liked the cartoons
that was good for your first animation - you seem to be pretty natural at drawing in flash... my only suggestion would be to work on the plot/joke... it didn't really make a lot of sense...
...and personally I'm not a fan of the computer generated voices (but then again a lot of people are so whatever)
...good job though - I liked it!
simple and sweet
good job it was nice and simple... the punchline was definitely corny... what I thought was funnier though was the previous reviewer's confusion...
man that was great! - it reminded me A LOT of College University... with style of humor... the style of animation and the transformer...
-some nice quick-paced humor.
oh and I think the eyes would be better if they weren't big black circles - (maybe add a shade of gray or something) - either way it is a great cartoon - do more please!
man that was funny - especially with the laughing idiot and the emo tv... good job - it would be a lot better though if you thought of a plot...
ExCepTioNaL choice in mucic - it really fit the mood and it doesn't get much better than Pink Floyd and RadioHead - Awesome!
... you mentioned that you didn't draw the car...
... so I assume that you didn't draw the house either... ???
because you asked for criticism:
Good job - I thought the first scene wiht the clouds and the buildings was real nice... and the different angle shots add a lot....
here are some things you might do to improve it:
- use something besides such a thin black line (especially on the face)
- make her eyes smaller (they're too close together)
- when she is running, in the shot from behind, she runs bow-legged... make her feet only move up and down
potentially good cartoon
this cartoon has an abstract, light humor that is enjoyable to watch, but it clearly needs a lot of work... I would reccomend:
- a LOT of works on the graphics...
- synchronizing the mouth movement to the talking (although it takes a lot of time)
- and funnier voices (which is hard for people lacking a funny voice - inclucing myself)
...hope to see some more (and better) stuff in the future!
Hey do u have a low intention span or do u not get about making a cartoon EVERYDAY! If i took my time and made big cartoons I couldn't put 1 on my website EVERYDAY! So next time u vote on Dinky count the graphics out and the style and humor in. But u have a point.
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