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nice trees

nice graphics... some of those woodland creatures remind me of the rat creatures in the Bone series... Ever heard of it?
...oh and I don't know what that guy was talking about... this is a hundred times better than any stick figure movie... in fact I kinda feel that those things should just be banned...

great job

its nice to see a funny cartoon where little animals don't get blown up...

very funny and well done.
good audio

interesting

although there are other ways to draw faces in flash.. your way seems to work pretty well... and if I had seen this a couple months ago I could have saved a lot of time figuring out how to stream the sound...
great job
(I like tutorials!)

I liked the cartoons

that was good for your first animation - you seem to be pretty natural at drawing in flash... my only suggestion would be to work on the plot/joke... it didn't really make a lot of sense...
...and personally I'm not a fan of the computer generated voices (but then again a lot of people are so whatever)
...good job though - I liked it!

simple and sweet

good job it was nice and simple... the punchline was definitely corny... what I thought was funnier though was the previous reviewer's confusion...

great job

man that was great! - it reminded me A LOT of College University... with style of humor... the style of animation and the transformer...
-some nice quick-paced humor.
oh and I think the eyes would be better if they weren't big black circles - (maybe add a shade of gray or something) - either way it is a great cartoon - do more please!

GREAT MUSIC

ExCepTioNaL choice in mucic - it really fit the mood and it doesn't get much better than Pink Floyd and RadioHead - Awesome!
... you mentioned that you didn't draw the car...
... so I assume that you didn't draw the house either... ???

because you asked for criticism:

Good job - I thought the first scene wiht the clouds and the buildings was real nice... and the different angle shots add a lot....
here are some things you might do to improve it:
- use something besides such a thin black line (especially on the face)
- make her eyes smaller (they're too close together)
- when she is running, in the shot from behind, she runs bow-legged... make her feet only move up and down

potentially good cartoon

this cartoon has an abstract, light humor that is enjoyable to watch, but it clearly needs a lot of work... I would reccomend:
- a LOT of works on the graphics...
- synchronizing the mouth movement to the talking (although it takes a lot of time)
- and funnier voices (which is hard for people lacking a funny voice - inclucing myself)
...hope to see some more (and better) stuff in the future!

Retox responds:

Hey do u have a low intention span or do u not get about making a cartoon EVERYDAY! If i took my time and made big cartoons I couldn't put 1 on my website EVERYDAY! So next time u vote on Dinky count the graphics out and the style and humor in. But u have a point.

I thought it was awesome

great job! I liked it!
sometimes the animation could have gone along a little faster (I was waiting for the scenes to change) and also you might want to change Junior's shadow's outside color to clear instead of white...
But still, I thought it was funny and well done... and Junior really seems like a nice character!

I really hope you enjoy my animations. If you have any questions I will answer them at Scourge1984(at)aol.com. Don't hesitate to tell me what you think (if it's good!!!)

Dave Klinger @BiggZugg

Age 40, Male

Washington & Lee University

MD or in school at VA

Joined on 7/14/04

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