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nice trees

nice graphics... some of those woodland creatures remind me of the rat creatures in the Bone series... Ever heard of it?
...oh and I don't know what that guy was talking about... this is a hundred times better than any stick figure movie... in fact I kinda feel that those things should just be banned...

interesting

although there are other ways to draw faces in flash.. your way seems to work pretty well... and if I had seen this a couple months ago I could have saved a lot of time figuring out how to stream the sound...
great job
(I like tutorials!)

I liked the cartoons

that was good for your first animation - you seem to be pretty natural at drawing in flash... my only suggestion would be to work on the plot/joke... it didn't really make a lot of sense...
...and personally I'm not a fan of the computer generated voices (but then again a lot of people are so whatever)
...good job though - I liked it!

simple and sweet

good job it was nice and simple... the punchline was definitely corny... what I thought was funnier though was the previous reviewer's confusion...

great job

man that was great! - it reminded me A LOT of College University... with style of humor... the style of animation and the transformer...
-some nice quick-paced humor.
oh and I think the eyes would be better if they weren't big black circles - (maybe add a shade of gray or something) - either way it is a great cartoon - do more please!

because you asked for criticism:

Good job - I thought the first scene wiht the clouds and the buildings was real nice... and the different angle shots add a lot....
here are some things you might do to improve it:
- use something besides such a thin black line (especially on the face)
- make her eyes smaller (they're too close together)
- when she is running, in the shot from behind, she runs bow-legged... make her feet only move up and down

potentially good cartoon

this cartoon has an abstract, light humor that is enjoyable to watch, but it clearly needs a lot of work... I would reccomend:
- a LOT of works on the graphics...
- synchronizing the mouth movement to the talking (although it takes a lot of time)
- and funnier voices (which is hard for people lacking a funny voice - inclucing myself)
...hope to see some more (and better) stuff in the future!

Retox responds:

Hey do u have a low intention span or do u not get about making a cartoon EVERYDAY! If i took my time and made big cartoons I couldn't put 1 on my website EVERYDAY! So next time u vote on Dinky count the graphics out and the style and humor in. But u have a point.

I thought it was awesome

great job! I liked it!
sometimes the animation could have gone along a little faster (I was waiting for the scenes to change) and also you might want to change Junior's shadow's outside color to clear instead of white...
But still, I thought it was funny and well done... and Junior really seems like a nice character!

I really hope you enjoy my animations. If you have any questions I will answer them at Scourge1984(at)aol.com. Don't hesitate to tell me what you think (if it's good!!!)

Dave Klinger @BiggZugg

Age 40, Male

Washington & Lee University

MD or in school at VA

Joined on 7/14/04

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